Yesterday was my birthday and everything was going well. It was Friday, I got 100% in my maths test and I won a game of soccer. After school, we celebrated my birthday with the family. I got cars, marbles, Playdoh and a slinky. Later, my friends came over and we all played Monopoly. When the game was over, we ate cake and played soccer. It was a breathtaking game and my team won by one goal. Afterwards, when I went to celebrate, I rolled on the ground and into my dog’s poo. I was so cross that I screamed at her.

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Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) · 2 April 2019 at 5:42 pm

Hello Michelle, I really enjoyed reading your story. I like the detail you provided and how you recounted the events of the day. As you provided a list of such happy and good things happening it was hard to see that anything could possibly go wrong. It was such a surprise when you landed in the dog poo. “Yuk”! I have a dog so I totally understand and could just imagine the face of the character in this story. Well done.

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