One day, at the palace there was a manager who loved to help the Queen in any way possible. He wanted to hire a person to do some jobs and set off to find the perfect person. He needed someone that was wise, quick at doing jobs and staying on task. The manager interviewed many people, but couldn’t find the perfect fit. After looking at so many different people’s talents, he nearly gave up. Suddenly, he thought of one more person, himself, and realized that he had all the qualities of a cleaner. So, the manager still managed but would always clean the palace.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

3 Comments

Ross Mannell (Team 100WC) · 11 October 2021 at 12:06 pm

Hello Zachary,
It was easy to see teh care you had taken in preparing your story, one I found interesting to read. My only suggestion might be to nit use “so” at the beginning of a sentence.

Ella Burke · 12 October 2021 at 7:55 am

I thought your writing was very good. It was very interesting to read.

    Ella Burke · 12 October 2021 at 7:57 am

    Scoil Neasain
    Dublin, Ireland.

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