Words to be used in writing: gorilla, yellow, running, bricks, pretty

One sunny day in Melbourne, a mum wanted to give her daughter, Kathy, a special treat so she decided to take her to the zoo. Kathy loved the zoo. Her favourite animal was a baboon, so as soon as they got there she started running to the monkeys where the baboons were. Then Kathy got bored, so she turned around and noticed that the prettiest animal was actually a gorilla. She was wearing a yellow hat and she was very pretty. Kathy started to walk up to the bricks where the gorilla was playing so she could get a closer look at her new favourite animal.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

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Mrs. Flanagan, St. Charles, Illinois, Team 100 WC · 18 November 2018 at 7:45 am

I loved reading your creative 100 WC entry this week, Michelle! I felt like I was along for the lovely visit to the zoo. You did a nice job capturing the moment through Kathy’s eyes. It was interesting to see the shift happen as Kathy discovered a new favorite animal. Was it just the yellow hat that made that specific gorilla so pretty or does she like all gorillas now? I wonder what animals they’ll see next? Keep up the great work!

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