Words used in writing: bricks, gorilla, pretty, running, yellow
I scream out every morning, noon and night, begging for a single coin in the rubbled, blood-stained streets of Paris as the blundering gorilla is running our country’s lower-class into the bricks. They waltz around in their pretty, yellow coats, while the rest of us scrounge around for scraps as we are taxed to death.
It is time for change. King Louis XVI will fall and all will be right. Well, that’s the dream. I rise from the broken stones on the street and walk towards the sounds of gunfire, moving as I can fast as I can on a starved stomach.
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Mrs Richards - Team 100WC · 19 November 2018 at 3:48 pm
Jack you have painted a very strong picture with your words – you used the five words very effectively. I would have liked you to make gorilla plural at some point to make sure the story was completely fluent but this is a minor editing requirement.
Keep up the great effort – I look forward to reading more of your efforts.
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