Prompt: gold, viola, searched, lost, ancient

Jax, the young teenager, went to the queen’s palace for dinner and discovered an ancient gold viola in a glass cabinet. The next day he went to the palace again for lunch. Afterwards, he went to see the beautiful viola, but it was gone!

The investigators were trying to solve the problem of the lost viola but they couldn’t figure out the mystery. Jax wanted to help, so he looked around the palace but he couldn’t find it. There was still one room that he had not searched in. It was where the dogs slept and he found it there.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

1 Comment

Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) · 15 June 2020 at 11:11 pm

Hello, given the challenge words, I like how you have used a palace as your setting. The first paragraph was good in how it set up the story by introducing the viola. I did think your story was going to finish differently. I thought the dogs might not have been friendly. That would have made the story very different. Well done.

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