Prompt: The vinegar was too sharp!

The vinegar was too sharp! I grinned because it tasted so bad. I hope no-one else tries the taste. It’s gross.

The next day I woke up and vinegar was in my hair. I did not know how anyone put vinegar in my hair. Maybe it was my sister? I asked her and she said she did because she knew how much I hated vinegar. Finally, I got it out by using lots of shampoo and conditioner. I needed to get my sister back, so I put some honey in her hair when she was sleeping. She was so angry.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

5 Comments

Jayden · 25 February 2019 at 1:43 pm

Good job, is this a real story? Or made up.

Jayden · 25 February 2019 at 1:44 pm

Nice

Chase · 25 February 2019 at 1:46 pm

I like how you ended up getting your sister back. Epic!!!

Leila · 25 February 2019 at 2:01 pm

It was very good and if you have a sister I hope she is not that annoying

Fabio O'Neill · 12 March 2019 at 9:31 pm

Good use of punctuation to seperate your sentences. Also good variation of words that you have used to start sentences, for example, ‘finally’. To make this short story even better you could use words like ‘foul’ instead of ‘gross’.

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