I am just lying here. I fell from the window, so here I lie in the middle of the path. People are stepping on me, not caring. I have feelings too. I’m not just a bear. I’m Willy. I’ve tried to get back up to Sasha’s room before she comes home from her dance lesson. I’m hoping someone will throw me back through the window before she misses me. It isn’t Sasha’s fault. She was running late for ballet and chucked me on top of the bouncy ball, which made me ricochet right out of the window. I’m so sad.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

2 Comments

Evelyn · 27 February 2019 at 1:57 am

Dear Jazmine,

WOW! What a great story. I think you really have a talent for writing. Your story was great and very descriptive. I think if you keep writing you could be even better. I love how this story relates to people in real life! In real life people do activities and lose things. so Sasha losing her bear was truly very relatable. You really do have a great way with words.
Evelyn
PA, USA
http://evelynssis21.edublogs.org/2019/02/19/week-21-100-word-challenge/

Evelyn · 27 February 2019 at 1:59 am

Dear Jazmine,

WOW! What a great story. I think you really have a talent for writing. Your story was great and very descriptive. I think if you keep writing you could be even better. I love how this story relates to people in real life! In real life people do activities and lose things. so Sasha losing her bear was truly very relatable. You really do have a great way with words.
Evelyn S
PA, USA
http://evelynssis21.edublogs.org/2019/02/19/week-21-100-word-challenge/

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