Once upon a time there was a girl called Roseifeen and her favourite thing to do was play with her teddy. One day, they went to a theme park. Roseifeen wanted to go on all the rides. First, she want on the Gravitron and then the Tumbler. On the Slingshot, her teddy began slipping out of her reach. Zoom, the teddy was gone. Rosey was a mix of sad, shook and scared. She needed teddy to get to sleep!!! As soon as the ride was over, she raced around the theme park and eventually found it under the machine. She was soooooooo relieved!

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2 Comments

Cliona Brennock · 26 February 2019 at 5:13 am

Hi Brooke,
Well done on your story this week. I enjoyed reading it. You capture the fear that any child would feel if they lost their special teddy. I’m glad that the teddy was found in the end.
Keep up the great work.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland

Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) · 27 February 2019 at 9:30 pm

Everyone loves a Teddy. I think you show how important a Teddy can be to someone. It would have been so easy for a Teddy to fly out of Roseifeen’s hands. I like how you built the tension in your story; the Teddy began…zoom…gone. Well done.

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