Words to be used: fringe, black, washed, eggs, flickering

Once in an enchanted forest there lived a black dragon. His name was Kye and he had a long fringe covering the scar on one of his eyes. He lived in a deep, dark cave and in that cave there were eight baby dragons hatching from their eggs. They were all covered with icky, sticky liquid from the eggs so Kye took them to the flickering, sparkly waterfall and washed the baby dragons gently. After they had a wash they went out for their first flight. They tried and tried and tried again until all eight of them could fly.

Categories: 100 Word Challenge


Emily · 7 February 2019 at 12:28 pm

I like the creativity and the dragons

Om · 7 February 2019 at 12:55 pm

Great image and imagination Henry.

Frank · 7 February 2019 at 12:55 pm

Great imagination Henry and nice punctuation.It is action packed as well.

Mike Cameron · 7 February 2019 at 2:18 pm

Hi Henry B
I loved the way you used both flickering and sparkly into your story. Obviously the sun would have been shining upon the waterfall with the cascading water making the light flicker. Well done and a great short story.

Raghav · 8 February 2019 at 7:14 am

I love your imagination!

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