Words to be used in writing: bricks, gorilla, pretty, running, yellow
The gorilla challenged the monkey, “Let’s do a running race to those yellow bricks and back. Whoever wins gets that stack of bananas”. They raced to the yellow bricks and the monkey won easily, so the gorilla flipped out and started chasing the monkey angrily. The gorilla had forgotten the monkey was so quick and as he remembered, he threw a rock at the monkey to slow him down. It hit the monkey and he fell to the ground in a daze. That pretty old monkey shouldn’t have been harmed. He was just a poor little old monkey in pain.
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Mrs A ( Team 100WC) USA · 26 November 2018 at 1:28 am
I like the way you start the story with a BAM! The gorilla was a sore loser, alright. You use a lot of detail to add to the story. I especially like the words, “Flipped out” and the phrase ” ..chasing the monkey angrily.” I felt like I could really be right there. Keep on writing!
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