Words to be used in writing: rose, scooter, excitedly, transparent, late

He propels around on his rose red scooter, late at night below the transparent sky, glistening. A gift. His name is Scootman. He stops crime, comes out with the murderer in his hands. Crowds scream excitedly, thrilled to see Scootman himself. No single person knows his true identity, but I think I know.

12/11/20
At 6:39pm, Mark Sherbet, a famous scooter daredevil and martial artist walks into an abandoned building with a bag and the exact same scooter as Scootman.

At 6.54pm, a crime is solved by Scootman, but Mark is still yet to come out of the building. Coincidence or not?

Categories: 100 Word Challenge

4 Comments

Bill Cunningham · 30 May 2019 at 5:42 pm

That was brilliant , Rex. I was sitting on my seat at the end, and now I am scratching my head, wondering who it was who came out of the building? What a thriller – and all in 100 words.👍

Sue Cunningham · 30 May 2019 at 6:12 pm

I loved the suspense at the end Rex. More please.

Tia · 12 June 2019 at 8:31 pm

This is a magnificent blog Rex,maybe next time you could try using embedded clauses it will make your blog more interesting other than that I love how you left on a cliff hanger please write a part two

iron Thunder · 13 August 2019 at 3:36 pm

You actually make it seem really easy with your presentation but I
in finding this matter to be actually something which I believe I’d
by no means understand. It seems too complicated and extremely wide for me.
I’m looking ahead on your next post, I will try to get the hang of it!

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